Turn back to the good side?

Anakin wanted to rule the galaxie. But how? Some siths said that he can get an army and allot off spaceships. It was all a lie. They wanted to rule the galaxie themselve. Anakin was betrayed. He couldn't trust anyone anymore. Is all what they said about power a lie or is it true. Then Anakin thinks about the time when he was a Jedi. The Jedi's had always the best for him. But then almost never said why he couldn't do it or why? But there was a reason for it. To protect there friends against the Dark side, the lie and betrayders.

Anakin realised that he made an big mistake. Was is to late to turn back to the light side? He could always try to turn back. Turn back where he had friends. Where he can trust someone. And where he can sleep. He can't sleep now. Some people want him dead. So if he sleep then they could kill him.

But he can possible change back. His Sith 'friends. Betrayders. Wanted to attack the Jedi temple and kill the jedi younglings. Anakin went to the temple for protecting the the younlings. Thats the less he can do.

Anakin standed for the Jedi temple's gate when the three sith warriors landed. "So, did you decided to join?" asked one off the three. Anakin looked up. Took off his cape and pull out his saber. "No, I'm not, I'm here to protect these children." The sith warriors starded to laugh. "Or else your with us, or else your against us, what shall it be?" Anakin took his saber and ran to the sith warriors. "Against us it will be." said the sith boss.

The three siths took also the saber. One had a double saber. And the sith boss had a saber in each hand. The third had a single saber. This is going to be difficult. But it was for a good perpous. Anakin jumped up and strike down. The sith in the middle blocked the strike. The two others attacks Anakin. Anakin pushed one away with his new attack. The force push. And he kicked the otherone away. Then he does a backflip. "Come on guys, I thought you guys where better then this? You can speak but not fight. Phatetic." The sith boss laughed. He knows that Anakin is playing with him. Then he said against the sith with the single saber to attack Anakin alone. Then he could see how Anakin fights.

"So you won't fight by yourself eh, a slave off you must fight? You will fight later" said Anakin. Then the sith came to Anakin. He was a real sith. He had a dark skin. Scars everywhere. Trained by his own father. Who he killed him. It was still a young boy. Fighted allot. But only against weaklings. Not against someone as Anakin. The young boy tried to throw an object to Anakin. But Anakin avoided it easly. Then he tried to throw two objects. Anakin avoided the first one and cuted the second one with his lightsaber and then he attacked the sith warrior. The sith warrior blocks the attack. ANakin is pushing his lightsaber closer to the young sith warrior face. The sith tries to push it to Anakin. But he can't. He kicks Anakin and jumped backwards.

Anakin was still fighting the Sith. But then the younglings came out the Temple. Anakin looked to them. They must go back inside. But then he gets hit in his back. Anakin turns around. Does a kick. The sith flied away. Then he uses his force to get the top off the temple and throwed it to the young sith. The sith was crushed by the top. The sith boss and his slave where surprised by Anakins force power. Anakin ran to the children and explain them to go inside. But they didn't believe him. But then the second sith came to Anakin. The one with his double lightsaber. He jumped before Anakin and before the kid. He killed the kid. "No, he was innocent" Anakin tries to slash the sith down. But he was quiker and jumped over Anakin, and whil he was over him, he tried to hit Anakin. Anakin blocked the attack and slashed the saber in two parts.

Anakin was wounded. But still fighting against the sith and the dark side. The blood off is wound fall down on the ground. It was allot off blood. But Anakin doesn't care. The only thing is that he protect the jedi younglings. But he still must fight. He still stand over the sith. the sith saber was broken. He couldn't use it anymore. But he took the saber off his dead friend. But he wasn't that good with a single saber. He attacks Anakin. Anakin blocks all the attacks. Then he sees a free spot to attack. He attacked and cut off the left arm off the sith. "Damn you stupid fool, can't you fight" said the sith boss against his slave. The sith boss walked to Anakin and his sith slave. Using his force lighting. But not on Anakin, but on his own slave. He killed him.

Now its was the last fight. Anakin against the sith boss off the three. Anakin was wounded and used allot off enery. But he won't give up. He was almost there. The sith Attacked Anakin. Anakin avoids and attacked back. The sith avoids to and attacked back. Anakin blocks the attacks and uses his force push. The sith get pushed away. The sith stands back up. Does a combo attack. Anakin was hitted again. Now in his arm. Anakin dropped his lightsaber. But he use his force to het it back. But then the sith was gone. Where was he? Then Anakin hears some screaming in the temple. The sith was inside it. Anakin runs to the doors. But it was sabotaged. Then he sees a window. Anakin jumped up true the window. Anakin was inside. Now he must find the Sith.

Then he found him. He was fighting against the jedi younglings and padawans. Anakin jumped between them and pushed the younglings away. The younglings took some steps back and sees the fight between Anakin and a sith. The sith attack Anakin. Anakin avoids. Kicked the sith away. Using his force to get him out off balance and cut off his hand. The sith lay down on the ground, he couldn't fight anymore. "Leave this place and never come back" said Anakin. He turns and walkes to the children. But the sith ignores Anakins order and throwed his lightsaber to Anakin. Anakin used his force push to push it back. The saber get into the sith. The sith died. But it wasn't on perpous. That felted good for Anakin.

But Anakin falls down on the ground. He was injured. He lost allot off blood.

But when he wakes up he sees a black shadow. Who was it?

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And can someone grade this?

"i said you that they will betray you my friend"yoda said that when he stood up from shadows

"Then tell me what I can do for teruning back to the Light side"

"come with us and you will not have enemies with us we will help you"yoda said that and done force healing
he gave much of his force to heal Anakin and when he done then he was much weaker

"Thanks, my friend, if I can help you then tell me"

"you can only help me by coming back to good side now lets find that sith"yoda said that and start searching for sith lord

anakin 7xstory gain and +8 alligment for protecting younglings\

Yoda +1 alligment for healing anakin

"Lets do that, but before we go, we can train together" said Anakin.

"fine by me now stick together i cant fight alone i lost much force by healing you"yoda said that and started the search on the sith

Anakin walked close to Yoda. Looking for some siths.

But then saw Anakin some weird man. ALways looking around to every people watching there moves. That man was scared but from what or who? Anakin walked to the man and putted his hand on the mans shoulder. The man was so scared that he pulled out an red lightsaber. This was an sith.

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